Which Should I Post

I am taking a poll, i have 2 versionso f the same story, part 1 of the first was posted sometime back and due to medical issues ect I have been unable to post more
What I would like to know is, the story is "Workout Girls" i have 2 versions, one is "more tame" but plenty of NC/Humiliation Male Dom ect. the 2nd version of the story still in the works is longer, with more detail paid to each lady, witrh humiliation ect. ect
I would like to find out which version readers would like to see, the shorter more tame versino, keep it mind both are long stories, but asd mentioned 1 have far more detail in it then the other.
Please vote in the poll so i can determine if i should continue to post the shorter one or the 2nd version i am still working on

Thanks for your suggestions and feedback in advance

Pen_Telme

What's going on here? Write the one that gives you the most pleasure.

If you wrote a second version, that means you were not happy with the results of the first? Which do you like best? That would be the one to post IMHO.

It sounds like you like both of them. So go with both. The abridged and unabridged versions. ;)

I do, but when i post a story, my intent is the readers pleasure, that is why they are posted, i like the more detailed longer version but other reeaders may not