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It was music and dance
last night
alone in the house
coolness kissing bare skin
hiss and whisper
passing space
no thoughts
just song with grace
my body spoke for me
beckoning
calling
eyes closed
lips wet and parted
head back
arced
arched
a semicircle of waves
as arms sway
and hips delay
then rotate
an immersed portrayal
of a rhythm my words
cannot express
fluid pace
pulsing cadence,
emotion
in motion,
tendered embrace
Very nice.
That was great Echoes:)
Erotic indeed....very nice
Thank you, reading the other poems here is slowly putting my mindframe back a bit into submissive mode and thinking...I go to post on them but the screen stares at me white and my mind goes blank, not knowing what to say or how to voice how their words left me, except beautiful or sighs.
Echoes, I really liked this one. You do a great job with your words and style. Thanks for posting.
Thought this was beautiful, Echoes, especially
beautiful rhythm to it. Thanks for it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Echoes
-was my favorite bit. Well done, Echoes!Quote:
emotion
in motion,
tendered embrace
Well done. I like the way that the line breaks enforce the subtlity of the pacing of the images, almost as if it were being spoken breathlessly.
TDS