Wolf

[moptop]

I love the way the interaction and balance between you both flows and changes, with your passion , as it rises - boils - subsides

[Echoes]

very nicely written, I loved it, especially this part

But I am not finished yet
And I will not stop until I decide I am
Such a good dog

Your eyes grow desperate
My eyes grow hungry

[Timberwolf]

Thanks learningtopleez, moptop, and Echoes, I'm glad all three of you have enjoyed my work.

[ropenhighheels]

Oh wow Timberwolf! That spoke to me in so many ways! A very erotic, and intense poem! I especially loved this....



....because it reminds me of ropenhighheels and me....I too, would never have chosen him, if I only wanted one that would follow. *soft smile*

Thank you for changing your sig. line so that I could have the pleasure of reading your poetry!

Nice work Timberwolf!

Very true statement ltp....you know I'll always be the one leading us!

[elyse]

"You buck, and slide, and try to escape
But I am not finished yet
And I will not stop until I decide I am"

ohhhhh, baby.....

i, um, i mean... remarkable imagery coupled with an undeniable rhythm that connects on a visceral level.... mmmm.... coupled.... undeniable.... visceral.... ohh...

*accusingly* no fair! you turned my brain off!

[Timberwolf]

ropenhighheels - I thouhgt you might enjoy this.

elyse - Turning off your wonderful brain is no small achievement. *Takes a bow*

[Valkyrie402]

A Goddess deserves to have a pet such as you..........amazing and beautiful poem....lucky Lady...

[Timberwolf]

I'm glad you feel that way Valkyrie. Thank you very much.

[TheDeSade]

TW. . . you have convinced me that I am a poor imitation of a poet. I am continually amazed at the quality of the work that is posted here. . . thank you for sharing.

[Timberwolf]

I think you do not do yourself enough credit. ;-)