Which Should I Post

[mkemse]

I am taking a poll, i have 2 versionso f the same story, part 1 of the first was posted sometime back and due to medical issues ect I have been unable to post more
What I would like to know is, the story is "Workout Girls" i have 2 versions, one is "more tame" but plenty of NC/Humiliation Male Dom ect. the 2nd version of the story still in the works is longer, with more detail paid to each lady, witrh humiliation ect. ect
I would like to find out which version readers would like to see, the shorter more tame versino, keep it mind both are long stories, but asd mentioned 1 have far more detail in it then the other.
Please vote in the poll so i can determine if i should continue to post the shorter one or the 2nd version i am still working on

Thanks for your suggestions and feedback in advance

Pen_Telme

[Ozme52]

What's going on here? Write the one that gives you the most pleasure.

[sujet]

If you wrote a second version, that means you were not happy with the results of the first? Which do you like best? That would be the one to post IMHO.

[Aesop]

It sounds like you like both of them. So go with both. The abridged and unabridged versions.

[mkemse]

I do, but when i post a story, my intent is the readers pleasure, that is why they are posted, i like the more detailed longer version but other reeaders may not