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  1. 10-01-2006 #1
    elyse
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    One

    another Iron Poet commission, this time from Qmoq. his mystery words: agony, desire, touch

    the form is the star here; i've chosen the Fibonacci, in which the number of syllables in each line is the sum of the syllables in the two previous lines...

    ONE

    One
    glance;
    one touch:
    all You need
    or will ever need
    to arouse within my body
    this cataract of desire untold, unimagined.
    'Tis sweet agony, this anticipation of my inevitable surrender.

    -- elyse
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  2. 10-01-2006 #2
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    Another fine effort. Short but very sweet, and says so much. You have a way with words I really admire.
    Mit diesem Herz hab ich die Macht
    die Augenlider zu erpressen
    ich singe bis der Tag erwacht
    ein heller Schein am Firmament
    Mein Herz brennt

    - Rammstein
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  3. 10-01-2006 #3
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    Best one so far. I thought it was great.
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    you did very well...Very nicely done.
    Should you need anything, need to make a comment or suggestion please feel free to PM or email me at superopposite@gmail.com


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    I will not rest until you are
    Lady of this house
    Slut of the bedroom
    Whore of the basement dungeon

    1/14

    sleeping slut....
    sleeping slut being raped....
    slut enjoying her shame in front of her master
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  5. 10-02-2006 #5
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    i loved the 'One' elyse. You are incredibly talented, looking forward to reading more
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  6. 10-04-2006 #6
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    i can only restate what everyone else has said - you are very knowledgeable, talented and so very intriguing with your words. i've read each of your poems & look forward to reading more. thank you!

    cookiecat
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  7. 10-04-2006 #7
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    just WOW again! smiles
    cali
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  8. 10-04-2006 #8
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    Elyse you are so very talented. I wish I were only half the writer ye are!
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