Storey Concpet: Reluctant Dom

[whippedcream]

I like this idea very very much. Have you ever read the book Phantom, by Susan Kay? There's a scene in there like that, where the main character is given a young slave girl to use, but she's so afraid of him that he can't bring himself to do it and gives her back. Every time I read that part I'm like nooooooooo (especially since they killed the girl as a result of her lack of cooperation).
I would love to read a story with that theme. Maybe I'll even write one.

[Master13]

I hope to have "A Reluctant Master" ready to post in its entirety before Christmas. I wouldn't count on it though. If I don't make it, I'll post a new projected deadline here.

[Eraser]

Looking forward to it.

[Cokera]

Oh yes! Please continue on the process. Sounds like the makings of a great story.

[Master13]

I'm still doing some final editing. I will submit it to the library sometime next week.

The more praise I get for a story no one has read yet, the more nervous I become that I'm going to disappoint you all. Which makes me spend more time editing. Which makes more people post here in anticipation. It's a vicious cycle.

[Master13]

I just submitted the story to the library. I still feel like it needs polishing. In fact I was makeing changes minutes before I submitted it. But I realized that I could keep "polishing" it forever and never be completely satisfied.

[Eraser]

still under the title A Reluctant Master ?