Aloha and so many thanks,

as I said I knew it wasn't just spot on. My grammer is okay but certainly not up to standard and I thank you for your comments. I will sudy some basic grammer for future.

I found the passages you highlighted difficult and when I write I usually can tell, grammer aside if it is okay or not. I liked the idea for the telling of the tale but it just didn't quite come off this time.

I will strive to do better.

I realy do appreciate the time you took.

Once more I kiss your hand and remain your humble servant.

Dog xx