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  1. #1
    Non-Practicing Anorexic
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    Just a Bit of Silliness I wrote "back in the day when..."

    My, my, my, pie in the sky
    And how my brain is fried
    When all i can write is jibberish
    and nonsense and such
    Is there any clever new prose?- not much!-
    in that THC-soaked brain
    with a weed-shaped stain
    What happened to enlightenment, advancement,
    curiousity, and enhancement?
    i'm left with mushy white cells,
    squishy gray jell
    Trying to impersonate my brain
    Trying to pass as sane

    Do i regret the fun i had?
    Have i treated myself so bad?
    i opened my mind up so far,
    left the door ajar,
    and now my brain is at war
    Or maybe my mind was open too wide
    and my brain just fell out and died
    Either or, the end is the same,
    i'm mindless and numb and mentally lame
    i can't think past TV land
    i can't count past my hands

    But i can still touch the stars in the sky
    'cuz fuck it, i still get high!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Think i'm done gunnin' to get closer to some imagined bliss
    Gotta knuckledown and be okay with this.
    ...and I know that I was warned... still it was not what I had hoped...
    ...'course that starstruck girl is already someone i miss...
    -ani d. "Knuckledown"

    Eponine's story - that's mine! I invite and appreciate all variety of commentary!

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    guiding littlemis
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    You may think this is silliness, I like it. I like the slightly wistful feel of the second verse and then the defiant twist on the end.

    More please.
    three weeks without food
    three days without water
    three minutes without air
    but not one second without hope

  3. #3
    Non-Practicing Anorexic
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    Well, thank you! I do have other poetry, but this one was really in a class of its own... my other stuff is more...erotic or somber. But thanks again!
    Think i'm done gunnin' to get closer to some imagined bliss
    Gotta knuckledown and be okay with this.
    ...and I know that I was warned... still it was not what I had hoped...
    ...'course that starstruck girl is already someone i miss...
    -ani d. "Knuckledown"

    Eponine's story - that's mine! I invite and appreciate all variety of commentary!

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    I think I liked it but my old eyes have a hard time seeing that small font.
    WB

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