Storey Concpet: Reluctant Dom

[Eraser]

Looking forward to it.

[Cokera]

Oh yes! Please continue on the process. Sounds like the makings of a great story.

[Master13]

I'm still doing some final editing. I will submit it to the library sometime next week.

The more praise I get for a story no one has read yet, the more nervous I become that I'm going to disappoint you all. Which makes me spend more time editing. Which makes more people post here in anticipation. It's a vicious cycle.

[Master13]

I just submitted the story to the library. I still feel like it needs polishing. In fact I was makeing changes minutes before I submitted it. But I realized that I could keep "polishing" it forever and never be completely satisfied.

[Eraser]

still under the title A Reluctant Master ?

[Master13]

still under the title A Reluctant Master ?

Yes, It should be listed as A Reluctant Master by Master13. I assume it will be included in the next update, but this is my first, so I don't actually know how long to expect between when I submitted it and when it will appear in the library.

[Master13]

The synopsis was suppoes to have a second part as follows:

Daniel is one of Cerna’s many merchants, an alchemist. Unlike most men of Cerna, he doesn’t enjoy the availability of feminine flesh for sale. He is one of the few Carnians with moral objections to slavery. What will he do when a slave girl comes into his possession?

I'm not sure if I made a mistake and left that out, or if the second part got cut off for some reason. Either way it's not that big a deal. I just thought it would be nice to have one paragraph about the setting, that I could reuse for any other stories in the same setting, and one for the specific story.