Quote Originally Posted by bracemaiden
While awfully difficult to give out plot advice without a vague plot, how about having someone un-expected come in? A police officer to rescue the kidnap victim? Someone who was "in on the whole thing" gets revenge on the one enslaving the other? Or some other random passerby? How would each of the main characters feel when they saw the new person?

- bracemaiden
I see your point of view...assuming you are a bottom, this twist could juice you very much and rightly so.

Say the heroine(s) don't know a shit about BDSM; they always control every situation they are in, then suddenly, they have that control taken away from them, and they relunctantly come to enjoy and then crave it? Do you think that would that be a real juicer for the majority of the readers? For me, this would seem to be an expected ending and not a real surprise twist. Just asking...

Nik