story ideas needed

[paindreamer05]

hello im new to this bulletin but im looking for some serious pain ideas for a story im doin about a young girl who gets into trouble at school and im having a hard time with the pain ideas so any painful ideas would be welcome

[rounders31]

hello im new to this bulletin but im looking for some serious pain ideas for a story im doin about a young girl who gets into trouble at school and im having a hard time with the pain ideas so any painful ideas would be welcome

Well, I would have to say that you need a little more specific of a setting, or scenario before you get into the specifics of pain. The idea is good, but a few questions such as who is administering the pain, what is the main agenda of the pain, (i.e. sexual rape as the medium vs. purely sadistic pain w/o using rape) and what the limitations are due to the setting (school room, gymasium, principal's office or home, etc.). But if you have these in place or want any ideas for where the story should go, feel free to email me.

[paindreamer05]

the story would be in the school class when the girl forgets to do her homework and turn it on time the girl would learn a lesson about time schedules and why it is important to keep them . the pain and punishment would be by the teacher who is female and has a dark side that the school board doent know exists in such a quiet meek lady. the pain could be administered on the playground or the football field. what ever pain you can create is clearly ok by me the girl would be the one feeling the wrath of the punishment

Well, I would have to say that you need a little more specific of a setting, or scenario before you get into the specifics of pain. The idea is good, but a few questions such as who is administering the pain, what is the main agenda of the pain, (i.e. sexual rape as the medium vs. purely sadistic pain w/o using rape) and what the limitations are due to the setting (school room, gymasium, principal's office or home, etc.). But if you have these in place or want any ideas for where the story should go, feel free to email me.

[Mr. Veide]

The female teacher tells the girl she must be disciplined. She gives the girl a new uniform to wear. The girl must undress her old uniform and hand it to the teacher, including her panties, which are carefully examined by the teacher.

The new uniform is different in many ways:

Tight blouse with Navy Blue tie
Knee-High Navy Blue socks
Extremely Tight White Frilly Panties (with "Property of Teacher" inscribed on the crotch area)
A very short Navy Blue pleated skirt (not quite covering the girl's bum cheeks).

The girl nervously dresses in her new uniform.

The teacher then takes the girl out onto the school field, then has her stand with her hands above her head. The teacher strikes the girl's bum with her cane and orders her to stand with her legs apart.

The breeze makes the little skirt expose the girl's panties.

Teacher has another surprise. She inserts a vibrator into the girl's pussy. The tight panties hold the vibe inside the girl. The vibrator can give pain and pleasure.

The teacher smiles and shows her a handset remote control, then leaves her standing in the field.

Lunchbreak arrives, and many pupils cross the field, many of them gathering around the girl.
The boys cocks harden at the sight of the exposed and very fuckable girl, and the girls ogle as well, while using the word "slut" often.

She is not allowed to speak...

"What are you doing out here?" A female pupil asks...

"I'm...being..."

The teacher, watching from afar, heard from the microphone in the girl's blouse, and promptly punished the disobedient bitch by pressing a button on the handset...

The girl squeals and grabs her crotch in front of the crowd...

["Roof"]

hello im new to this bulletin but im looking for some serious pain ideas for a story im doin about a young girl who gets into trouble at school and im having a hard time with the pain ideas so any painful ideas would be welcome

How about a story set on a campus where pretty yet feminist teachers have warped the minds of the supercillious coeds so that they baulk at being sex objects of the boys on campus. Things have gone so bad (from the male hormonal aspect) that even the cheerbitches, despite when occassionally in their cheerleader high hemlines, are hostile to being groped and propositioned. So, the males---frustrated by the very small number of "open-minded" girls---decide by force and terror warrented by the coed behavior--- to radically compell the females into whores. The guys subject the girls to bondage and more-than-enough torture to break their spirit and extinguish any hint of resistance. The girls are compelled via savage tit-torture (electrical/tit-press) to dress in the miniskirts and halter tops they'd previously thumbed their prissy noses at, and are to submit themselves to any sexual use any male whoever wants them to perform, even when their public humilation is a deliberately staged event. They're so fearful of more pain that all the coeds---and even the feministic teachers---are now pain-fucktoys for the whim of any male wanting them. The girls know that with the level of pain that disobedience entails, resistance to being told to strip/suck/fuck---even in full view of witnesses, is just not worth the agony.

[paindreamer05]

all the ideas so far are great im getting along with the story just fine keep the ideas coming so i hope to be finished with the first few chapters .
all the ideas are sparking the flame for many new stories one about a girl who just turned 13 and is she in for a treat by the hands of her best friends dad and mom.

["Roof"]

hello im new to this bulletin but im looking for some serious pain ideas for a story im doin about a young girl who gets into trouble at school and im having a hard time with the pain ideas so any painful ideas would be welcome

Here is what I think is a very nice story theme; where a high school or college campus is filled with coeds and well-built female teachers. All infected with the feminist drivel mindset ("no, I will NOT wear a short skirt or show cleavage, how dare you suggest it!!" and "don't touch me you bastard, and I'll sue if you proposition me another time"). The guys have rarely scored and are pissed off at the snobbish and heartless way their hormonal needs are treated by the feminist wenches. They decide a radical change is needed on campus and harsh intimidation/extortion/enforced public sexual humiliation---and lots of gratuitous torture is the methods of choice. Transform the current campus fad of feminist-infected philosophy into a maledom bdsm one on a perm. basis; force all the pretty coeds into bdsm fucktoys. The guys will be as heartless as the girls have been, and more so. All coeds/female instructors, will be compelled to dress as the sluts they were meant to be. The chicks get their tits crushed in fiendishly cruel machines/devises constructed specially with remedial training in mind to reverse their haughty attitude. In addition to their tits being crushed, wires will run from their nipples to a wall socket or car battery. The bitches will be compelled to service pricks, any way told to do so and at any time, even (particularly) when there are onlookers to enjoy their humiliation.

[prey4me]

Paindreamer05,

First consider a couple of things: Can you write? I hate to hurt someone's feelings, but the fact that you're asking for starter ideas suggests you may be challenged in this area. Lots of us have fetid, perverse imaginations, and coming up with nasty ideas of what we would like our protagonists do to innocent young ladies is never a problem.

Write about what you would do if you had a magic wand and could create the environment and victim(s) you would like to hurt. Paint the larger situation first: the school, the nature of the student body (pun: ah, student bodies!), and whether your victim is representative of them, or different. Picture her in your mind--you might write out her physical and personality characteristics so you can make sure you don't write "small, delectable tits"
when you wrote "large cantalopes" ten paragraphs back!

(I always encourage writers to include exotic descriptions of pretty lingerie, including slips. Don't girls wear slips anymore?)

Then decide on who is going to punish her, and whether it will be done as part of/in front of a larger group, or in private. A school gymnasium late in the afternoon could offer lots of equipment for punishing your little miscreant! How about the school boiler room?

Figure out before your write your story the psychological end-point: what is going to become of your victim? Will she be a sex slave? Will she endure the torment, then be forced to return to a "normal life?" Will she be "ruined," (deflowered and emotionally destroyed) (my preferred ending) to use an old Victorian phrase? Snuff? Something else? Figure out ahead of time.

That said, I'll give you a n/c scenario I don't see enough of, and suggest you consider it: There's nothing like a beautiful, virginal girl, flat on her back, her clothes ripped to shreds, her skirt pushed up and spread about her hips, while she gets a good hard rape! This would involve bringing in a male. So think your story out, in full.

[slutsteph]

One thing i remember when i was about 13 was getting braces. When the dentist tightened them or increased the pressure through rubber bands or whatever, my pussy throbed. i didn't understand the significance then, but now i would love to read a story of nonconsensual orthodontic work.

[kassyS]

Story line obtained from some of the descriptions given on the website
Powershotz.com

Kidnapped Lexi must pose for the photographer in bondage in order to earn her freedom. She stubbornly refuses.

After being left bound to the chair for an extended period of time, Lexi still refused to strip off her clothing and pose in nude bondage for the photographer. So he makes her incarceration more uncomfortable by ball gagging and blindfolding the whimpering young girl.

Blindfolded and ball gagged Lexi is found laying on the floor crying. She tried to get loose and got lost instead. Now the photographer picks her up and sets her back on the chair. Still chained about the neck, broken and whimpering, Lexi agrees to take her top off and pose. But the photographer still refuses to release the poor girl.

At last Lexi agrees to pose topless and bottomless for the photographer. She lets him have his way with her, and after he finishes shooting, he give her the key...embedded in a block of ice. The block slides away and she cannot reach it. When the photographer returns, he strips her nude, photographs her again, and leaves her alone to melt the block of ice with her body.

After which, he still refuses to let her go and just takes her.

Just an idea. Fill in the details as you wish.