Razor thank you for doing this assignment, and doing it so fast too! I am still trying to get the wording of the assignment right, so that the students can understand what to do. I have made a change to how the assignment task reads, and would appreciate it if you could have a look and see if it is clearer now. You are only the second student to try the new, improved level two! Please let me know if there is anything else you think I should add to the wording of the task to make it easier to understand.

Okay, back to the assignment, again you did a great job, thank you. I am able to see what parts you would change and why. It is all done in a very clear manner and all of the changes make sense and add to the story.

You are now ready to move onto the third assignment. As you already rewrote the above chapter, please try the other two suggested writing tasks, or you might like to rewrite one of the other chapters posted in the sticky.

I look forward to reading your work.
AG