Thanks for the changes, they do add to the flow of the story.

I liked the new ending too, it was far more personal and told me more about Steve too. There were a few slight mistakes though

Steve regretted that he could not have participated in the little scene they had stage.staged She looked quite delectable sitting concealed in the bushes with the rain shimmering on her very attractive body. As Lisa approached the number 300, did you number 300 as in a house number?Steve began to look forward to the day he could indulge in all of her charms as he trained her to be a perfect slave. If he did his job right perhaps he to too could be found worthy by the company and be granted the status of Master.

Thanks for your great work in Level two. I am kicking you upstairs where the real work will begin, but I am sure you can handle it.