Nikita's first level three assignment

[ladychipmunk]

Great re-write. I like the additional background you added. Just one observation.

June went home that day a different woman. For several weeks, things seemed to be going well. June had the paperwork under control just as I had her under control. However, I had to fire the bitch last week for lack of enthusiasm. She intercepted blackmail pictures that I had sent to her house after her husband had come home from work. June came crawling back and now, is a little more eager to please, like a well-used office slut should be.

This is my favorite part of the re-interviewing process.

I lost the thread a little bit in above paragraph. Maybe a scene where she gets fired. and then him sending the pictures or threatening to send the pictures would help clarify the action. Why does she come back to this office instead of going somewhere else?

LadyC

[Nikita]

Good point Lady Chipmunk. I had a problem with that too; just wasn't sure how much more information was needed, if any. Thanks for the observation.

If I get a chance today, I will add a substitution paragraph in a different color, below the one in question. It's a darn shame the editing feature has a time limit.

[Ruby]

A time limit?
The editing feature?

Nikita, I feel a thread drift coming on.

Are you doing something other than highlighting and then bolding and/or changing the color of the text?

Is there some secret tool that will make my life easier?

Please share.

PS

I won't be reading this update until later in the week. Please let me know when you are ready for me.

[Nikita]

A time limit? The editing feature?

The edit key at the bottom of each post has some kind of time limit. After 24 hours you can't edit a post.

Nikita, I feel a thread drift coming on.

I hope not.

Are you doing something other than highlighting and then bolding and/or changing the color of the text?

I don't think so. I did the highlighting and bolding below.

Is there some secret tool that will make my life easier?

God I hope so...If there is I want to get in line for it too.
Please share.

I'll always share with you Ruby. ~where's the snicker smiley?~

PS

I won't be reading this update until later in the week. Please let me know when you are ready for me.

Ok...