Well, the meat grinders may have something to say about some technical items but your changes - well, you ran with what I offered and it gave it a lot more feel. The rain - the environment was much more alive.
Good job.
Well, the meat grinders may have something to say about some technical items but your changes - well, you ran with what I offered and it gave it a lot more feel. The rain - the environment was much more alive.
Good job.
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