*Taking the whip from deigja and hunting Rubberwolf with it until he - RW- has found back to his old writing form.*

Of course you're right, deiga. Writing a story means to wrestle with every single sentence, and sometimes...well, you loose. I often come to a point in my own narrations (WARNING: self-marketing!) where I just don't get my act together. Every formulation seems to be weak and wrong, and it takes a long time to make it finally fit. It especially happens when trying to connect two very good scenes; between them both author and reader easily fall into a hole.


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*blushes heavily* Venom, this girl never puts out a whip unless she wants it to be used on her. Even teasing him with it is only a means of provoking the oposite...
Like Nietzsche said: "Wenn Du zum Weibe gehst, vergiß die Peitsche nicht!"