interesting, i like the tempo and the images that come to mind, the third stanza? i think thats right it's been a long time since i've written any poetry. reminds me of how life has gone all wrong for me and that somehow it's been all my fault. and with the last bit, i imagine staying away from that that hurts me, but i still manage to hurt my own feelings, but instead of dont' let go i keep the words just have faith running through th mind. i like this, got any more? if you want i'll share some of the stuff i've written if you would liek. just leave me a message and i'll go dig it out of the dusty box.