I'm writing one at present: it started as a story but shows every sign of growing into a novel, so I'm hoping to sell it to Silver Moon or similar.
I'm particularly fond of it because it started as one of my oldest fantasies. When I was about 15 I built a detailed story about how I kidnapped the hottest girl in school and kept her in the cellar for intensive slave training, till I had taught her to love belonging to me and I could safely let her out! This is the same story written with (I hope) adult technique.
Speaking of which - I asked on another forum here but didn't get an answer: would someone be prepared to proof-read the last chapter for me for cultural references? It's set in England but the sub is American, and I'm aware that I may have slipped into the sort of howler that I notice in US authors trying to write English characters. For most of the book it isn't a problem, but in the last chapter there is a lot of business between two American characters and I'd like to make sure there's no embarrassing slips. If you'd like to help by checking it, mail me offlist.





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