Very nice, polecat! I'm looking forward to seeing how people interpret the backstory behind the picture - and this was really sexy, very crisply written! Mmmm. Now, if only we could get the backstory behind the backstory, and a decent lesbian scene between Marcella and Lisa. Purr.

I loved the use of humour too, it really brought out the character of Marcella and made it much more exciting when she finally submits.

Q