zephyrs scream

[TheDeSade]

[opening her mouth
she wordlessly keens
a zephyrs scream;

YES!. . . . the repetition of that line drives home what I perceive to be the core of this piece. Everything else ties back to the image it evokes. It rocks!

[Echoes]

YES!. . . . the repetition of that line drives home what I perceive to be the core of this piece. Everything else ties back to the image it evokes. It rocks!

I love your passion and it was immense joy to dance with you amongst words and emotions. I have not done this before and thank you for showing me this.

[Echoes]

Thank you EB and Talia for reaffirming this was entirely a different poem and opening it for discussion and invigorating my mind.