Wow, it looks like she got to this piece in a big way. Good job, Ladystouch. There are few things more enjoyable than watching my friend's get ripped!
Aussie, I notice that the students find more fun in critiquing your stories than mine. I guess you have more screw ups than I.
Man, I like being mean!
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03-29-2008 #1Covered in Orangeblossoms
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03-30-2008 #2Scribbling & Learning
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Nay, H Dean, it's not that your story isn't tempting to edit. It's that your reputation precedes you, and not many of us are interested in painting a target on our backs for your delicate criticisms. lol
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Diving for cover, now...Lady C
"Beauty is only skin deep, but ugly goes clear to the bone."
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03-30-2008 #3Head Greeter
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LOL Well, even though Lady C has already stood up for me, I also have to agree with you. I know there are a LOT of things to fix in that first chapter of mine, which makes it is perfect piece for students to pull apart! Originally Posted by H Dean
I am glad it gives you so much amusment to see it being ripped apart, as a friend I am pleased to see you happy!
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