Third assignment for Mishka

[Beswitchingly Positive]

Finally a scene where a submissive woman stands up for herself. I shouldn't say that, being new and all, but all I seen a few barely believable compliant sub stories, and was hoping to see something more like this.

I liked your dialogue, I thought it convincing and felt the tension in that scene. This is the woman who makes up for all the characters that just go on dumbly suffering at the hands of a insensitive maniacs!

Will the next trick be to write an incredibly sexy make up scene? I could see them having that kind of tension, too. Yum. Very nice. Kneeled and knelt and all the red marks aside. One of the helpful people here pointed out to me that editing gets easier the more you do it.

[Mad Lews]

This is the woman who makes up for all the characters that just go on dumbly suffering at the hands of a insensitive maniacs!

Hey play nice, some of us maniacs are very sensitive
Yours
Lews