Quote Originally Posted by theladystouch View Post
Well, I can see there are even more formatting mistakes than I feared. Do you wish to try to muddle through my edits, or would you prefer I take another stab at it? I'm sure the learning curve will smooth out with some practice.
If you want to have another go at the editing you can, but I don't feel it is really necessary. You have shown me what I needed to see, and that is that you have a very good eye for editing. You managed to edit the story in ways that will improve it, without editing just for the sake of editing. This is a real skill and you should be very pleased with what you have done.

It is interesting for me to have the students edit this chapter, as it was honesty my first piece of published writing and my first attempt at an erotic story! I had no idea about paragraphs and even posted it all as one very long story! lol I was lucky that readers liked the storyline and were able to ignore all of the very obvious mistakes!

Lady C I would like you to take some time now and think about assignment 3, which is to write this story from a different point of view. It could be a background of one of the characters, a behind the scenes view or even a future view of what you think might happen. I want you to add your own feel to the story. This is my chance to see your writing stlye, so have fun.

Looking forward to seeing you work.

AG